I'm fine

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25° 41' 55.4136" N, 80° 27' 37.6704" W

Remember whe we would hod hands
Remember when you said we would last forever
Remember when you tore my heart out
No? Because I remember

I remember our long talks,
Our long walks
I remember our laughs
Our fights
But you don't seem to care

I remember that night
That last time
When you broke my heart in two
And the child whose heart is broken too

I remember perfectly that day
When you went away and
Decided we were no longer good enough for you

The last words you said,
I never loved you,
Yeah I remember those too and
I realize that, I never loved you!

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

powerful 

i felt the emotion behind this poem

its about living and learning

glad u moved on

continue to build on this idea and keep writing

Mely_1995

Thank you so much glad you liked it :)

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