I win.

Location

Best.

Worst.

First.

Last.

 

 

i am hard at work, accomplishing nothing

 

i'm not finished

 

what makes me flawless?

(i didn't capitalize my sentences. is that a flaw?)

no, no. a simple typography gimmick

 

increased margins

It's supposed to be edgy.

 

i think i'm flawless

the mistakes everyone else makes, i see with my eyes

 

 

this should have appeared earlier in the text

 

if this is hard to read,

then

 

that's your fault flaw.

 

i don't have any.

 

Best.

Worst.

First.

Last.

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