i want you to

Wed, 08/15/2012 - 16:45 -- Cece22

i want you to
love me
kiss me
hold me
i want you to know me make me feel alive and not only by breathing in and out of my nose and mouth
i want you to
know me when i am gonna cry
i want you to love me for me and not my body
thats why they say beautys only skin deep
i want you to
love my persona and my personality
i want you to love me
but it is only in my love me
dreams
then it is reality and know i got a baby your a teen daddy and now im a teen mommy
i want you to
love me but now its real how something fake become so real
boy i want you to love me
but you leave, cause now you got a baby
that don't faze me you crazy
in the back of my mind you i say we just made a freaking baby and i thought it was all about sex and seeing you flex no stress
youve gave me an oppurtunity to finds someone new
and to thing that i really loved you guess what!
i dont want you i dont love you

Comments

jwiener

This poem really expresses how even when we get the things we want, it doesn't always turn out exactly as planned. Also, nice use of repetition in the words "I want"- you really convince the reader of your passion.

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