hunger

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

my love and hunger to be the absolute best is endless
there are people that want to see me fall, in my eyes, your existence is lifeless
critics often criticize me for many, my words will leave you breathless
ignorance influences others to not think for oneself, therefore, leaves you mindless
opinions are varied, but if the intent to verbally assault me intentionally,, your presence is meaningless
what good are you if you don't bring out the best in me, you are useless
my drive to overcome adversity will make adversaries mouths drop and numb motionless
relevant at the moment, in the end, their name are unimportant making them nameless
attempting to assassinate my writings will leave you lost like a drifter walking aimlessly
my expressions comes from the heart shamelessly
how dare you try to discard me like a unwanted email carelessly
your stupidity is what people will remember that will leave you in anguish foolishly
your life is on a collision course like two cars crashing to each other recklessly
No one in this lifetime, in this world puts fear in my heart, therefore, I'm fearless
my hunger and desire to be the best keeps my heart pounding with courage relentlessly

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Reinanena

Big CUDOS!!! Love it!!!!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

its a very powerful msg

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