Hey Guy

Mon, 06/16/2014 - 19:19 -- mfurey

Hey guy, I think you caused my heart to stop.

My lungs can’t breathe. I can’t say a word to you.

Without you in my life my heart strings would pop,

All that I know is that I’m in love with –

Your eyes always pierce deep into my soul,

And brighten every corner of my heart.

Your smile always makes me feel like I am whole.

I would collapse if we were torn apart.

In the words of Beyonce, “Say my name”,

And that would surely be the final straw.

Resuscitation. I have you to blame,

Taking my breath away is your only flaw.

Yet, words to describe you are never few,

I’m gasping to say I’m in love with you. 


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