Her Perfection

From the smoothness

As I gently run my fingers along your skin

Your simple touch is what guides me

Motivating me to be more

Such a dream like this to be as vivid

Would be a dream come true

With that beautiful aura that seemingly glows

Around your blissfully angelic being

I want to see the aurora borealis

Try to amount to what magnified light you have

Shine for me

Caress me within your silvery wings

Show me that this is worth it

And in the end move me

From every moment spent with you

Makes me stronger in love

Than the pounding of our hearts

Hope, is all but a mystery waiting to be solved

Yet, willing to be deemed known

Incorporate just what notion

Lies beyond the infinite

To infinity and beyond

Is even less than you.

Comments

dhern105

Ok, first of all, how'd you get the text to look different ? 

Second, this poem moved me.  While reading it I was able to imagine some scenes here and there.  Keep doing what you do.

LuminNoel1996

Thanks, and I changed the font and size?

sincerebeautyx

This is Beautiful. 

Satacey

Da**. Super romantic. structure seemed impeccably fluent, maybe until the from, where i wondered was it supposed to be for. But the imagery and the captivation *sniff* (Im going to go eat ice cream and cry about my problems now)

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741