Her Lovely Hair

Mon, 08/21/2017 - 22:50 -- vivtrxn

oh her lovely hair, 

that shone so brightly like the shimmering sun above

and flowed like golden waves on a blonde, sandy beach

oh her lovely hair, 

that locked everyone under a spell

and hugged her body tight so she glowed like an angel 

oh her lovely hair, 

that glimmered and illuminated

when she sang a rich, melodious tune 

oh her lovely hair, 

that was longer than a tower

and made her so much more lovelier

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