He And I

Mon, 11/24/2014 - 17:49 -- babycp

He will never intentionally hurt or abuse

Although David does what he wants; I always respects the rules.

His mother spoiled him as a child

So to the other kids, I was always wild.

Growing up he always had the latest clothes and shoes

And my grandparents over-protect, since all they watch is the news.

Raised with respect by his whole family

So I always had respect and chivalry.

Well balanced because he got the best of both worlds

Part of me loves love; part of him never trusted girls.

Standing only 5 foot 5 but amongst the best with athleticism

Short tempered; but very good with accepting criticism.

Extremely high confidence, but often doubts himself

Conflicted characteristics, that only one person can help.

Everyone has an opinion, some good some bad

Some will make u happy, some will make u sad.

Thanks to God, and my mom; I have enough courage to let the world see

That the man behind the curtain just so happens to be me!

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