Grecian Woe

A classic tale of love and intrigue.

The ancient Greek saga. 

Homer, alas, has a Tumblr.

And does nothing but post all day.

Will he ever write that novel?

Only time (& the fates) will tell.

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

SaucyMan

First poem. Lemme know what you guys think!

Keen

I enjoyed it very much. Firstly, I had to look up tumble and found that the word itself, is a poem.

I like the shortness of the poem compared with Homer which goes on forever and maybe you have to read for school and you get into him so much but can't enough because you spend so much time on social media. You have no time to write your novel, alas.
I think that because the poem goes from ancient past to present.

I like that you put a capital at timber because it gives importance to what Homer is doing but also what the poet wants to feel and do. Thanks.

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