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"Where have all the good women gone", dudes often wander foolishly
"I can't seem to find the right one,"guys often complain idiotically
the repetitions of "they are all the same" fellas often fail miserably
 
So where have all the good women gone off to
in front of your face and you didn't see it coming
 
There was a good woman on her way to work to fulfill her career
she said hello, but you didn't take a second look
Another pretty young lady smiled, but she just wasn't quite your taste
And what about the one who called you on her break and ask about going to lunch
You broke up with her  because she was "too nice" and you choose to date a bird
 
It's not that there are no good women, as guys, we make poor choices
It's not that there all the same, it's just that you have a "type"
And stop running after chicks who are physically enticing
but have hearts that are black full of evil and spite
remember the say hell have no fury like a woman's scorn
when she breaks your heart, its the sweetheart that will pick it up and place it back where it belongs
Because she knows the sacred of your love
And the sentiments of your soul
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aysia.mcneil

9 years ago

I see I inspired you

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

i get inspiration from everywhere

i was inspire when i read your poem

no one ever mentions from a man's point of view about wanting a good woman

i thank you for your terrific work

i wanted to impact lives and raise awareness

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aysia.mcneil

9 years ago

I have, you are a great poet. You really have a way with words.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

thank you so much

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Quiknodda17

9 years ago

I didnt even know guys thought like that. Thats beautiful of you.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

thank you

guys are not really known for emotion

they want a good woman, they don't make the right choices all the time

i wanted to bring this poem to life

thank you 4 support and check out my other poems

powerful.imani

9 years ago

Well i haven't went anywhere 

I am  girl who 

listens and take the time to understand and not judge 

I am always there for anyone in need and never leave their side until they are ok 

I am a classy young lady and treat myself with respect 

but when a guy (not saying all guys ) they treat me bad why do i deserve that when all i do give you loyalty and respect,honesty why can't guys (not all 0 understand that 

that's why girls get so bitter because al they guys who couldn't do right 

why was my heartbroken to the core leaving me inside with no heart.

I can understand and relate to this poem 

Please check out my new poems because I took your advice and wrote how i feel and finished it i could really use your powerful words 

thank you 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

i'm glad you enjoy the poem

i'll defintiely check out your new poems

how u been imani?

powerful.imani

9 years ago

Tbh Friday a bad day and all that emotions but I know I'm strong get through it all.I'm continue to shine bright like a diamond Imma continue be me let myself more from this cloud of fear, frustration and find my rainbow :-)

* question do you know how I can receive emails to let me know people because all of a sudden my phone stop giving me E-mail?

How are you MVP???

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

use that energy to write your thoughts and feelings freely

call your phone company and ask about issue with not receiving emails

Nyarial

9 years ago

appaulds

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

thank you

means alot-check out my other poems

dolvas

9 years ago

I enjoy this poem...I can relate

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

thank you

meant every single word

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