God, can you hear me?

Location

I ask myself, God can you hear me?

Crying, stressing,

but still happy because I’m a blessing.

At times, I don’t think I can make it,

 Some days, I can’t take it.

Feeling lost in this world, like I wasn’t meant to be,

Which makes me wonder, do you hear me?

I already lost my best friend,

That was the only person that knew me like the back of her hand.

Never knew I was going to stress like this,

If only I could make one wish.

Which brings me back to my question,

God, can you hear me?

Guide that inspired this poem: 

Comments

Jordan Hamer

Really good!

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741