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forgive me if i laugh you are so sure of love you are so young and i'm too grown in learning about love.  the rain exploding in the air is love the grass excreting me sky is the tranquility of peace  and stones remembering past steps is love, but you. you are too young for love and i'm too grown  once. what does it matter when or who, i knew of love. i fixed my body under mine and went to sleep in love all trace of me was wiped away  forgive me if i smile young heiress of a naked dream you are so young and im too grown to learn of love.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you for the comment

my inspiration come from infinite-something i feel, saw, read, witness, watch, etc

it brings out ideas

regarding the format-for some odd reason, format itself came out different when i posted it

im very humble that you enjoy my poems-check out my other pieces

Dragon Queen

Wow, this is incredibly similar to Sonia Sanchez's Ballad, one of my favorites.

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i get inspiration from all over

i give much respect and love

thank u 4 support-check out my other poems

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