"Flawless"

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Flawless

I am

As far from that as you can get

I am

Flawed

I am insecure

It isn’t true that

I can do anything

I know that

My fears hold me back

I will not let

Anyone tell me I am perfect

I believe it when I hear

That I am a failure

I will never think

On the positive side

I only think

I have disappointed so many people

It is a lie that

I will lead a successful life


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Comments

nhanakis

wow this was incredible it's by far one of the most creative poems i have ever read!!

HersheyKandice

Beautiful Poem

l.m.coleman

You seriously worried me at first. Ha ha. (That was me nervously giggling.) But then that blessed, blessed note at the bottom morphed my mind just like a positive life turn. :) Well done. 

 

claraq1

wow i love that wholepoem it was awseome 

Amy

So, so very cool!

T. Talbott

That was so AMAZING!!! So original.

Butterscotch_Poetry_

That was amazing absolutely LOVED the creativity !!!! ❤❤

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