Fix Me.

Sat, 01/25/2014 - 19:20 -- missv

wouldn't it be beautiful?

if the deathly tone under my eyes,

enlivens and brightens instead?

 

or if my facial shape,

transforms into a feminine structure,

instead of having the cheeks that babies have?

 

wouldn't it be beautiful?

if my collarbones emphasized my neck,

and gives me the figure of the lady I wanted to posses?

 

or if my body,

my slender body,

grew in areas where it's curves speaks the classic language of romance?

 

oh how I would change,

the simplest things,

to achieve such an image.

 

oh how wonderful it would be,

to be the beautiful I wish to become..

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