First song

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Fleeting glances, 
Silent passes, 
Your eyes locked on mine. 
Sway to the left, 
Just out of breath, 
All for the very first time. 
Sway to the right, 
Feelings, don't fight, 
Now it's for you that I long. 
Dancing together, 
Set on each other, 
All to that very first song.

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RDG

10 years ago

This brought to mind the excitement of holding someone close for the first time.  Sometimes a song will bring back those feelings if you hear it later.  Thank you for your poem. 

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