fire so fast
give me reason why this pain feels so vain.
the fire so fast bullet skreaches throught my flesh,
the fire so fast im between life and death,
the fire so fast heartachce and sorrow i have no life tommorow feels like the fire so fast
the speed of the damn bullet, hurt me and so many they used one bullet but plenty
speed of the bullet so fast,you are afraid but you dont admit it
feel like a man your a boy playing with something that isn't a toy its weapon hurt you hurt me hurt anybody no remorse and no sorrow i love my life to the fulest because me you or anybody might die tommorow,with the fire that burn so fast like a bullet!!!!!!
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jwiener
The words "fire so fast" definitely made a big impact in this poem since you not only used them as the title, but repeated them several times throughout. You get the point across that we should live our lives to the fullest, because there will always be bullets headed our way, fast, whether they be real or metaphorical.