In The Eyes of a Friend

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She smiles carelessly

with no regret

Her eyes glisten with curiosity

and often confusion

She's as vast as the universe

but trapped in her own thoughts

Hard headed

and determined to beat you-

at any game

 

Confident in others

But not in herself

She's the sun

Bold and bright

She's the moon

Tranquil and quiet

She is a rough coursing river

Fragile like a Dandelion

She's a nice calm rain

with the booming of thunder

 

She loves deeply

And hates generously

Gives freely

and waits patiently

 

She's an opportunity missed

With the chance of a lifetime

filled with happiness

The one and only

She is flawless

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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