Even if She Ask Me to Wait for Her

Fri, 02/05/2016 - 23:47 -- jerlee

She was like a meteor falling down from the sky

If only I can catch her, maybe she will be my farewell

It’s not like the passage of time that heals,

It’s the passage through experiences that burn

The guidance of endless steam fall between one root

Where the first love will never be forgotten

And the last goodbye will never be faded

Only forgiveness will lay by your side

As the trail of light begin to die

How soft can the darkness be

When it shredded my flesh to piece

Maybe if she fall between my arm

Then I won’t be consumed

By those who held me down

I care not to set this leer of chill

Even if she ask me to wait for her

She will alway be my falling meteor

Now I will wait for an eternity

Frozen in time

 

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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