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Fri, 10/10/2014 - 02:04 -- elebean

rain is falling
 people calling
  dark sky
   bright lights
     day or night
      one more time
       lightning strikes
        walk alone
         through the night
          
          sitting down
           breathing in
            slow down
             take it in
              smoke is rising
               people dying
                friends are crying
                 people breaking
                  liars faking
                   time keeps taking
                    more and more
                     blood and gore
                      not anymore

         

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