Determination

I can feel the breeze touching my face
Falling down on my toes, as I stand outside the door
Waiting for you to let me in,
So I can share with you all our goals and dreams
As I stand here
I long to tell you everything can be done
Only if you believe
Sincerely,

Determination 02/14/2013

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

11 years ago

it's all about believing in yourself as you indicated in your poem

its about not allowing anything/anyone stopping you from achieving so much more in your life

keep writing and build off your ideas

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