Dance ! (Extended Metaphor Poem )

Sun, 11/18/2012 - 14:45 -- T.moore

Location

30106
United States
33° 50' 30.1416" N, 84° 37' 55.9776" W

Graceful on my feet
as I move gently like a soft wind hitting a sheet. Of paper.
feelings kept inside are spilling out from left to right
a few mistakes here and there they will be fixed. Later.
I am alone in this big world with out a smile on my face
lonely like a swan who lost its beauty and its grace.
I sit here and remember the memories i once shared
is being so Lonely the reason I am scared?
Being myself tends to drive me insane
because all I ever do is nag and complain
and the fact that on my journey I know i will be crumbled .
From.people that judge and rudely mumble.
My only vision is to express how I feel and one day reunite with the others like me
to bind together like a intwind spiral or a tied string around a key.
I want one more chance to be happy again. Id give up anything to smile
i want someone to.pick me up and make.me worth while
I want to express my laughter my tears my madness my fears my hopes my screams
I am a dancer and this is my dream.
I want to be kept together in ones mind like a folder.
That I can easily be spotted and have a chance witch is given by the beholder.
So I guess I will keep looking and.take just one.more chance
someone who knows they will cherish me with just one quick first glance.
I've been written all over by mean things people have spoken
but when I move to the music I seals the lips that once.was broken.
To be perfect you have to prepare today which determines tomorrow's achievements
or to think logically.and make a dollar.out of a. Worn out distressed cent .
Blind once now i see
who took.a pen and wrote dance all over me
changes my whole existence transformed me and Wham!
my life now has meaning cause of.who i am

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T.moore

This is a poem that explains a little part of how i feel as a dancer compared to a old poem on a sheet of paper

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