Crying to God

Tue, 05/28/2013 - 14:22 -- Zensho


United States
43° 28' 29.0496" N, 75° 5' 4.1136" W

I can’t stand anymore
It hurts to breathe
I can’t take anymore
Please save me

God You’re my only hope

Voices around me are screaming
Pain is a constant feeling
I can’t do this on my own
I can’t get out

God cleanse my soul

Here I fall crying out loud
“God come save me”
Just when your hand comes to help me out
My chains pull me further away

God please release me

Tears are ever present in my heart
I have nothing left to hold on
I lost my hold I’m falling off a cliff
I’m dying alone though I’m surrounded

God Take me away

Blood flows from countless open wounds
When I gain ground pain makes me fall
When Hope comes to my door
Fear steals it away once more

God end my pain

Don’t leave me dying here
I’m at my limit can’t take much more
I can’t see where I’m going
Just don’t let me die

God breathe into me new life

God I know you are there
God I know that you care
God break these chains let me out
Pain holds me tight like thorny vines

God cut me free

Please hold on to me and don’t let go
Tears stain my cheeks
You caught every one
Enough to fill a sea

God please save me

I’m surrounded in darkness
Please keep me strong
God I need you to keep going on
I can’t see any hope

God light my way

In this death I will not stay
You will make a path
God don’t leave me here
You’re all I have


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