Contradiction

Location

The adolescent flair once abandoned

Now is the critically acclaimed charm

In the Fantasty Castle

Occupied via a more deserving owner.

 

So why did I attempt to perform ethically

As I ventured a taboo path hypocritically?

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

11 years ago

interesting style of poetry

i like how this poem ends with a question

wondering why? what happen?

use your creative ideas and continue to build

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