As we stare into each other's eyes

We form an unbreakable bond

Through sunny days or cloudy skies

We begin to love and become so fond


The sun has gone behind

The frozen, standing hill

Who knew what we would find

Now both hearts have become still


The stars will show our names

In a bright, dazzling light

More precious than a silver frame

Our minds could not form such a sight


Our smiles seem to intertwine

The same way our love will reside

This love is strong and divine

When you and I collide

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Your writing is great! Please read the one I posted and let me know what you think about it. Thanks.


Sure I would love to :) post the title of it on my comments and I will find it

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