Changing into my own Man

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I'm shell of a man I used to be

No doubt unless you can see

How the angels laugh at me

Kneel down I feel so empty

 

How the hell you still standing

On your feet, god damn laughing

Mocking what we used to be

I have fallen broken both my knees

 

The air I breathed left me on my own

The world breaking my only hope

Let light please be my condone

I think I've made my atone

 

I've moved on, I understand

How your dreams, Now must began

Behold the truth if we can

The sins I engaged made me my man

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