Broken World and Broken Mind Controlled by Technology

Sun, 12/22/2019 - 17:51 -- Sivan

Television is like a broken world 

Scattered people, lost in their own Mind

Like a dog chasing its tail,

Running In circles as they repeat again,


Like the powerful Brain

Being drained, into the night

Like the fog you see at your sight

As you walk into the screen 


You come out programmed to fall on

Your Knees, 

You broken piece.


This poem is about: 
Our world
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This poem is about how people eventually become depressed because they have no source of happiness, only technology in fron of them. How people hide their gift of knowledge behind technology. Instead of using their powerful mind learning, engaging in hobbies/extracurricular activites they are using technology 24/7 in no benefical way.

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