Brandon Bitner R.I.P.

Mon, 07/01/2013 - 12:18 -- Deanna

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that last day, when you cried, that last moment, when you died, it wasn't when you ran, or even when you fell, it was the moment, when you said that no one ever cared, i was there, i cared so much, but you never heard my words, even when i screamed so loud, you never even heard, i was there when you said you couldn't take the pain, i held your hand and told you that over again and again, i said i cared, i said i was there, but you still never heard, why did you listen to all of them but never to us all, you were loved, you were important, they all were full of shit, but when it mattered most of all, you listened to none of it, you pushed us out, and let them in, you lived a life of pain, but now you're gone and we remember, all of your sarrows and pain, we remember you, we visit you, we love you still and always, remember that the day you died, you took my love away

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LEOS_WORLD18

its too many of us day by day thats taking our own lives...i was once their and know how things could be...ill be praying for you but we all still can help and save a few...if you've never been told..i love you..were all GODS children so i had to tell you

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