Brand new shoulders

It ain't the piercing screeches nor the bright rays that got me up today. The burdens of treacherous days dragged me down only for me to wake up refreshed in the day. The easiness in my shoulders got me up today as I prepare for the brand new day without the burdens that are sure to come. My brand new shoulders are sure to last the day.

This poem is about: 
Me

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LavenderElephant

Beautiful! I love the feeling of hopeful exhaustion you conveyed. Well done!

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