book of genesis (in honor of God himself)

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god is the architect of the world 

he became a visionary of what the world should be

as the creator, his sole purpose is peace, love, and prosperity.

and then adam and eve

the 1st two human beings in this magnificant place call the garden of eden

all he ask them to do was take care of it and nurture it as if it was their own domain

tension and conflicts arises

disagreements that lead to exile

creating their own version of adhering the law 

listening to a voice that knows nothing about jurisdiction

words that was full of  insurmountable lie addiction

all the devil knew how to do is be a thief

that lies, steal, and destroy by any means

takes away hope from vulnerable souls

annihilate a child's innocence to be more promiscuous

life is the greatest gift one can ever have 

how does that translate to today

people don't embrace life itself

everyday feels like a war zone

the 2nd amendment that entails the right to bare arms

so it's being honor by ongoing killing sprees coded by genocide

to have hatred without even knowing a person

because there is so much utter chaos and violence

god's words were hidden

god's presence was unacknowledge

god's plan was deviated by ignorance of people who follow the footsteps of satan

who is clueless about the essence of life

forgot that jesus sacrifice his life for all the sins people commit 

and this is how as a nation we thank jesus

by continuing to be angry at the world, where it's not the place itself, but the people living in it

contributing to studies of how many young people are behind the walls, with bars in between only to show faces of despair

love that is only a word with no meaning

only time the word peace exists is when a piece of article that reminds a mother of her son's memory when he was gunned down mistakenly for someone else, and i bet the resemblance of the original person look nothing alike

we need to take our lives back by preserving our legacy in resonating the purpose of why we're here.

this is god's plan

to innovatively create a world that's beautifully stunning

embracing humanity that's healthy, and build live giving relationships

removing all the curses from the creation himself 

so i ask

who is willing to make this world a better place?

 

 

This poem is about: 
Our world
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Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this is a draft

want to see how it looks when i recite this

anything i may need to tweak

dolvas

Wow...so far..sooo good...brings smiles to my face...i think your on to something here...hmmm!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you for the insight

i want to read it, and play around with words that's going to soliify this new poem

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this poem is now complete

you can share and comment!

francis de'oliviera pio

hey! gud stuff u write...quite inspiring. mind being my mentor? coz i could really use someone of your expertise.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thanks for the shout out

check out my other poems i wrote

it'll be an honor to be your mentor

i'll check out your work

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