blink of an eye

Location

So distant, it seems unreachable

Unable to see you

Unable to hold you

But in an instant, I Can sense your presence

I close my eyes and i feel you 

Standing there, looking back.

Your eyes, shines on me, igniting my soul

I take comfort in the fact,

You actually, adore me, for me

Standing there with that smile,

That smile for only me to embrace

All my pain, All my fears, Disappear, it all goes away

in a blink of an eye

 

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Angelwith1wing

Aw! I like this poem. It protrays this love and tranquility you get when you think about someone who is so far away from your reach. In a way, you keep that someone special alive when you continuously write about them. Hence, she is right there with you everytime you write. Keep writing on my friend!

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Laurelisnotonfire

this is so beautiful. its not easy for me personally to be touched by a poem, but this really hit home for me. its so relatable and as your reading it it feels like your almost breathing in the feeling, like the words flow so smoothly they become your oxygen. good work 

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I'm usually not too big on love poems but this one was so beautifully written and relatable that I couldn't help but love it.

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