black sheep

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imagine being the odd ball in the family

but because you stand out from everybody else

it's okay to be ridicule

because you are so different

it's justifiable to be treated like an outcast

you are distincive from the rest

in your eyes

you are unique

to others

you are disgusting

what is a black sheep

a person that stands out

someone that is straight forward

you are your own individual

and yet, people

find that to be a threat

rather than embrace you like a newborn baby

you are the black sheep

stranded with white sheeps

regardless of color

sounds of sheeps is bbbbbbbbbbaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!

bbbbbbbbbbbbbaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!

but because you are different

the white sheeps run away

as if you were in their territory

this may like a story

but in all essence

this is real

so graphic that video games won't create a picture that's vivid

like a person's perception on one's reality

people are so quick to call you a black sheep

because you are not like them

that is true

i'm black, but not a sheep

i'm 100% all taino black puerto rican man

so never let anyone make you feel worthless

you are never

and i say never a black sheep to anybody

you are your own person

don't allow anyone take away your individuality

recite this everyday as if you are praying

life is not about fitting in

life is about standing out

 

 

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Comments

StephAngie Cote

Hi ! ( Genome MVP Most Valuable Poet : The Black sheep )

I really love your poem and just want to share with you the end of your poem...if,it's okay with you or add whatever...you like it or not.

I am not really good at it,like you do and I want to say...good work !

Take care ! God bless !

Hope, you like it !?

The end of your poem :

( Into the light...like,the white sheep,you always been. In reality...they carry this dark heart...for making you feel...you were the blacksheep ! )

OR this ending :

( Into the light...like,the white sheep,you always been.

When,they only carry,this total eclipse of their own heart...for making you feel...you were the blacksheep ! )

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

good morning stephanie

thank you for the feedback, like what you stated as an ending point

very poignant in your writing

come join my group mvp-most valuable poets

share and promote your work

God bless you

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