"Bitter Sweet"

Life oh so bitter sweet
fantasy and reality
push up under my feet
making me feel love & defeat
looking for anticipation
of some thing descreet
The taste of sour and sweet
water my taste buds, oh a lil treat
Until I wake up to reality
& I pull down my sheet
to get out of bed again
still feeling incomplete

Praying my morning prayer
That today my mistakes I do not repeat.



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