Bitter Beauty

Tue, 01/14/2014 - 14:49 -- lmgd831

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Words can't describe your beauty since your summer time fine,
You leave my tounge in dispare when we talk at times,
Although I wish not to make this poem cheesy with rhymes
I just want you to know how my heart feels.
They say love is evil the other way around.
some say a king needs a queen and every queen needs a crown.
I may not have the diamonds to express the love of mine
They just don't understand you there both deaf and blind
But I can see you clearly since the rain has stopped poring,
That smile makes a sunshine those eyes make a moonlight.
All those complements, there true.
Just like you.  The only way I can confess my feelings is through this poem to you.


In my dreams you are the one and in reality you still are


but in my dreams you feel the same way, in reality  you do not. 


 

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