Being in Debt

Sat, 05/11/2013 - 20:13 -- cwedel3

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41° 44' 34.5408" N, 87° 42' 44.4096" W

One..Two...Three... Four... Five.. Six.. Seven... Eight... Nine... Ten... Eleven.. Twelve.. Thirteen...Fourteen ... Fifth teen....debt. In a haze i lay, my eyes filled much with a glaze. The surroundings fade and life slips away. But today, I praise that man who guided me out of that maze. May I find words to say to he, I'd replay a million times a day. Cause the firefighter who pulled me out if that blaze, is the man whom I wish I could repay.

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cwedel3

Thank you Dr.P

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