that's all?  these are only suggestions from my experience which may differ from yoursyou may be a genius in which I am sorry for this critique please don't take me too seriously first of all you are very repetitivewhich lessens your power with words.  but also you switch from general to using imagery? i think we can get the message that you are being general without saying so.  i like your poems but this one needs some work. you have great vocabulary mostly though. next, beautiful?show me! you can't say that without making your reader question. frankly, its like a fairy tale.  you never know what it looks like. the earth is beautiful, i know, but this poem isnt reflecting that. else you need a plot, act like you are trying to convince an alien in a letter that earth isn't just pollution but beauty.  you need a story but there is no gradual change of thought in this story, no development, you don't really say anything. work on your character or maybe a compare and contrast poem . i want to read a conclusion, most novice poets start with nature by it self i think. (even me! i love nature!) but i want to see more.  i see that you tried that but you don't go into detail.  you have really nice phrasing here and there and its all and all really nice poem.  heres some questions:why is you character struggling or in need of strength? what does he / she want? how did he/ she realize the beauty in nature?  who are they talking to----generally/figuratively/literally? where is she/he? when is she/he? the future? the past?

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Nice efforts friend. Well written poem. I really appreciate it.You beautifully express the Nature in your lines.