The Beach

I feel the sand between my toes

my hair blows through the wind

o, how nobody knows

this is better than the river bend

the ocean is a good spiritual mend


I can see the waves 

when I build sand castles

it is way better than exploring caves

it seems like a hassle

when a giant bird hit my sand castle


I remember the banana boat

when everything went dark

I thought it would float

until I saw the great white shark

This poem is about: 
My family
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