autistic poem

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to my autistic brothers and sisters

who suffer autism

don't ever think for one single solitary second

that you buy into the notion that you have limitations

perception is you are deficient

but it what you do that inspires you to be efficient

 

you hear it on the news

about people who suffer autism

missing for days

one was found in cleveland and he is from new jersey

the other wasn't found yet

wondering innocently

unable to speak verbally

in places of unfimiliarity

easily vulnerable to sex offenders

hope you are found soon avante oquendo

in safe hands

not in irresponsible ones

because we all know what the outcome is

 

help these kids develop into good young men and women

keep them safe

they may be label autistic

but let's be realistic

they should never be treated as statistics

 

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Comments

Chibunma

The whole topic of the poem was good but it had no flow. Make it where a reader can read through the poem without hesitations. 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

With all due respect

this has nothing to do with flow 

nor it's about hesitation

its about a shoutout to people with autism

I wrote this poem to bring it to life in terms of awareness

do me a favor, never criticize a poet's work

Do not attempt to discourage my work in anyway

if you're not going to show support, do not comment at all

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