and could you see any other way

i'm in love with the way

her hands feel on me

the softest touch,

strongest hold,


i never want to let go


i need her smile

and her laugh

which light me up 

when my soul feels

the weight

of my chest


i need her eyes

green blue rings

black lashes

love the way she looks

up and tells me

i'm love


i need her arms

wrapped around me

hold me tight.


i wandered for years 



but tangled in her skin

i forgot what it felt 

to feel wrong because,

in all of my life

nothing has

ever been so



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This is SO good! Keep writing! 

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. 

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