Am I a Monster?

When you look into my eyes,

You see a thing that you despise,

A terrible, ugly deviation of man

But really, is that what I truly am?

A fearsome being for all to hate

And fear.  Is that my fate?

Wherever I go, I do not belong,

Wherever I stay, I cannot stay long.

For when they see my deformed face

And loathsome features I cannot erase,

I hope, I hope beyond belief

That, in death, I will find relief

From all the sorrow you have laid

Upon my heart.  For if I stayed

On this cursed land where I was forged,

I know I only would be scourged.

But if you had been noble and kind

To my fateful presence, I would not mind

The way I look to all who cannot see

The true being that lives in me.

So, as I pile up this burning wood,

I think about the way it could

Have been, if you had stayed with me

And helped me grow into the man I should be. 

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this poem is compellingly sad

its graphic, its genuine

its sad that people dont have an open mind  or heart to accept someone that looks different

never let that stop you from living

you have a purpose, define yourself

this poem reminds me of what is like to not be accepted by others

its doesn't stop, why? i live life through my eyes and no one else

be you, never change on nobody's account

great poem-felt the msg

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