A actor named Girl

A actor named Girl

in the original play called Life.

The reviewer said Cow,

Girl took to the knife.

The reviewer said Hopeless,

Girl took to the bottle.

The reviewer said Useless!

The reviewer said Go Away!

Girl felt like garbage.

She was in pain.

But instead of help,

Girl was called names.

The whole world was against her,

All in on the same Game.

So on the final Bow,

of Girl's original play,

she kissed Death,

and slipped away.

 

Comments

NCwilkins4

I rated this the other day and just stumbled across it again! Love it. Very clever.

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