2014

I fell in love with your kindness, I loved your warm smile.

I loved when you were present, I'm glad you stayed a while.

You were a lucid dream, too good to be true but I know you have to go, My heart will need some glue.

It hurts so much to see you sleep, no more laughter, it's time to weep.

Too late to say sorry but just enough time to say goodbye.

Our love has approached the end and it's time for it to die

Comments

Bray

I really enjoyed what you were conveying through your writing but some of the rhymes felt a little forced and to me seemed to detract from your meaning

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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