"Collide"

As we stare into each other's eyes


We form an unbreakable bond


Through sunny days or cloudy skies


We begin to love and become so fond


 


The sun has gone behind


The frozen, standing hill


Who knew what we would find


Now both hearts have become still


 


The stars will show our names


In a bright, dazzling light


More precious than a silver frame


Our minds could not form such a sight


 


Our smiles seem to intertwine


The same way our love will reside


This love is strong and divine


When you and I collide

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macebell42

Your writing is great! Please read the one I posted and let me know what you think about it. Thanks.

savigirl14

Sure I would love to :) post the title of it on my comments and I will find it

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