My Sucky School

Tue, 11/26/2013 - 17:34 -- Shmeeg4

School, oh school

School of mine

You may think you work hard

You may think your work is fine

Teachers need to be nicer

Listen to our needs more

Keep the classes interesting

And don’t make subjects a bore

Don’t put in a VCR to teach us

You will put us to sleep

Fight for our attention

Its something you need to keep

We don’t have a lot of desks

Our facilities are very poor

We don’t have air conditioning

Nor locks on our bathroom doors

We need the essentials

Such as these

We have only twenty computers

Get more please

We would like some tutors

To help us with our difficulties

Maybe if we had some

Us students wouldn’t have D’s

We have no parking

Available to us in the lot

All of the school doors are unlocked

So us students could be shot

Though you maybe old

We still love our school well

Even though we have unnecessary rules

That make our lives hell

Please follow my advice

It could suit you well

Work on your faults

And keep the qualities that you excel

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