Your not alright

you say your ok

but i know your not

it makes me sad to think

someone so perfect, flawless

would be so hurt deep down

you try to hide it with a smile,

but tonight is not your night 

for hiding, you broke down crying

and there was nothing i could do

becuase you live miles away, and out of reach.

so all i did was sit on the other end of the phone and listen 

listen to the cries, listen to the hurt 

you think your not special,

but somehow you light up my world even though

your on the other side of the world.

i wish i could do more, than write you a text 

becuase your so important and your worth more 

and some words on paper,

i wish you knew how much i cared.

i hope you know ill always be there.

 

                                                                      A.C.

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  

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