your no better than me

your no better than me yea you've already gotten your degree and you claim that you here to

help me but understand youre no better than me

just because your grown doesnt mean your problems are bigger mines are you blind

because you miss all the sign no im not fine you need to understand that me as a person and not

just your person doens't always sleep well at night and the homework that you give is unfair

i mean would you dare to try to to teach us why do you continue to preach to us your

 life story

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floralfauna

A++ example of how grammar/spelling can be used to make a good poem great

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