The sun said goodnight to the moon,
The moon said good morning to the sun,
Then 12 hrs later: visa versa,
2 fragmented moments,
When day becomes night,
Night becomes day,
The sun and moon wished they could talk more but alas it cannot be,
12 hrs of dark,
2 moments to say hello, goodbye, goodmorn and goodnight,
Not a lot if time,
2 moments that they both look forward too,
Such beauty,
Such dedication,
Such devotion.


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