Wrong

He asked me what was wrong

So I replied with the truth

"I find myself trapped

Stuck in your presence

Lost in your dimension

Sinking with every step.

You say you only 

Stay with the best.

At the time it was sweet

But now I see

It was a warning

A caution sign

Waiting to be made obvious.

I wish I could go back in time

To fix the past 

To change what you did to me,

But I can't.

We are stuck in a void

Of epic proportions

Past the point of no return.

That is what is wrong

With me."

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