Worth

Fri, 05/17/2013 - 20:33 -- absyr_x

Shouldn't you be happy?
Valedictorian
sure that's worth something
If everything was handed to you,
would you run away?
You're running after something
like a bullet in a train
And yes I want you to be happy
but I don't know where to guide you
I'm feeling more and more certain
the mistake would be to hide you

Comments

absyr_x

I wrote this about lacking adequate money to go to college, although I am Valedictorian. I will have to take out loans for upwards of $30,000 while some of my classmates are going for free because of vocal talent or because their parent works there. I thought it was unfair but I didn't want to write a poem addressing that. I just wanted to address what was inside, and why I felt I needed to go to this college instead of some tinier college that would have given me a full ride. I guess you can say in a lot of ways I'm really stubborn about things, this being no exception.

I want to major in Chemistry but I still have a true passion for writing, English, and languages. I feel that going to a school which does not fully support the creative arts as much as it supports science would be a mistake; yet these institutions (especially the one I have selected) will not give a Valedictorian (with ample community service; I've really put so much time into everything I've ever done in high school) a full ride.

Fahiru

Your poem really resonated with me. I just started college this fall, and financing it has been scary.  Sometimes I feel like they give scholarships out for everything but the things that I'm truly good at. I hope that your financial experience gets better, and that you will be rewarded for your efforts. I can't say that I've ever had it as hard as you do, but I know what it feels like to be left empty-handed when we deserve payback. Hang in there.

-Fahiru

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