Woo me when I'm 17

Won't you woo me when I'm 17

Make me into what the songs sing

Fulfill my destined dream

Won't you woo me when I'm 17

Stuck in that midsummer thing

Beyond that trickle of naive stream

Hoping for a restless scream

Awful and perfect and lost through time

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