Wishing Veins

The veins in her hands crossed like letters. Or maybe it was a wishbone. It made me think of my own wishes. Did I have any? Are they worthy wishes? Are they even big enough? Were they goals or ambitions. Turns out, my wishes were already alive. Then it occured she will soon no longer be. I' took it upon myself to carry on for the both of us. Thank you, Mom. Thank you, Dad. 

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
Our world
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AudreyBr

I wrote this on the subway as I stood in front of an elderly woman who had the most delicate and fragile hands I have ever seen. It provoked a stream of conciousness that is this poem. 

AudreyBr

I wrote this on the subway as I stood in front of an elderly woman who had the most delicate and fragile hands I have ever seen. It provoked a stream of conciousness that is this poem. 

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